Friday, May 25, 2007

A Bone

this is me throwing you a bone from my novel titled, The Guitar on the Wall, because i really have nothing else to talk about right now, but felt like i haven't written a blog in awhile. unfortunately, the way these blogs are laid out, it won't allow my paragraphs to be properly indented! but, you can kinda tell where it should be, so although it doesn't look right, i'm going to post it anyway. the following is an excerpt from chapter 1 titled, The Crash. this is how the book begins:


Joey had only been asleep for two hours when the sound of the bus tires driving over rumble strips awoke him. The others were awakened, too – five band members and their tour manager, until then, dead to the world in their bunks. Joey heard somebody frantically pull open a bunk curtain, but he remained still, frozen and terrified, waiting for the driver to correct himself.
"Hey, guys?"
"Fucking hell!" from the bunk below him.
The tires curved back onto smooth pavement to a collective sigh of relief. Then, the rumble strips again.
BRUMMMP BUMP BUMP BUMP BUMP.
"Jesus Christ!"
This time, it was the tires on the left side, the driver's side of the bus. Another curtain flung open. The tour bus, their home away from home, was veering rapidly off the road.


...that's all for now. have a safe and fun memorial day weekend!

Jimmy

1 comment:

Paul said...

Jimmy, it's about 11 PM, June 22, 2007, do you know what I was doing exactly 11 years ago? I was seeing Train for the first time, deep in the wilds of South San Francisco at Bottom of the Hill. This was an hour after seeing Cocteau Twins at the Warfield (their final tour, who knew????). Here's the Train set list, like the Apostles days I think I grabbed your copy (because I was always standing straight in front of your amp to get the right mix):


I Am
Rat
Violets
Train
Sometimes
Meet Virginia
Demilo
Blame
Homesick
Eggplant
Her Confession
Free

encores were:
Sweet Rain
Idaho
Counting on You

I have to say that I didn't really get it. Although you were getting a huge response from a packed Saturday night crowd, I couldn't get over how different it was from Apostles, and I had my doubts about Pat. But it was the greatest night, because I was so happy to see my old friends back in action. And look what happened. Watching three friends turn into rock stars is one of the most fun things I have ever done. Thank you so much for your journal, I hope every word of it all the way back to 1998 stays on line forever because I don't think there's a comparable record anywhere of the trek from clubs to arenas. Good luck with the book, it sounds like it would make a great Cameron Crowe movie. Maybe the story will include a friend who was there at the beginning, there for the whole journey, and never wavered.
as always,
Paul